Plaint
            Poems by
Richard Darabaner
            Edited and
with an Intro by
               Daniel Gabriel
            Published
by Dos Madres Press
            www.dosmadres/com
            Copyright
2012
REVIEW BY LO GALLUCCIO
REVIEW BY LO GALLUCCIO
                        According
to Daniel Gabriel's introduction to this relatively small but rather pristine
            collection
of poems, the author, Richard Darabaner, was motivated by “the quest for
knowledge
            and
religion” in his life and work.  He
earned a B.A. in English at Cornell University (summa 
            cum laude;)
an M.A. In English Literature at the City College of New York; and a Master of 
            Philosophy
in English at the City University of NYC, Graduate School.  He also taught at
            various
colleges and high schools in the NY area. 
In addition he has written several short           stories and a novel entitled, “Every Wound a Memory.”
                        Indeed
the wounding forces in both love and religion are made manifest in many of 
            Darabaner's
poems.  The title of the collection
“Plaint”is apparently an invented word to mean, 
            the
allision of lament and complaint.  His
faith in God is shadowed with irony and indifference 
            as well as
an “ironic recovery of that love....and an ironic redemption.”  (Intro.) 
As with Emily
            Dickinson's
darker side, the shorter pithy poems seem to be intimate with impending death. 
            Darabur
committed suicide in 1985 in New York City.
                        In
his poem “Desire” he writes:
                        (I
am, as a poet, accustomed to consummation in despair.
                         I am not longing to desire the sand.  This is a commitment of faith.) p. 3
            For some
reason, the sand, the object of the 2nd sentence raises
questions.  Is it the sand in
            an hour
glass and thus the sands of time; is it the sand of some ravaged Dalian desert;
or 
            perhaps the
warm beige sand Edith Piaf was found adoring after her life as a powerful and
            moving
scion-singer of France was cut short by alcoholism?  Maybe this sand is just sand,
            a metaphor
for the earth, but closer to the ocean and its tides.  Anyway, it seems clear
            that he
sees the fate of a poet to be “a consummation in despair..”  But “the renunciation of         sand”    is
also a commitment of faith..  Faith,
then, in what?  God, one imagines but
can't
            be totally
sure....
                        In
another poem, more Biblical and stately in syntax, the author speaks of  Christ, “The 
            Savior,”
and says:
                        “Yet
I have a heart of things unspoken
                          You turn again.
                          You would not hear me if I were there.
                           ….......
                          Only the thought of Him and you were
resigned.”
                        “This
is a great gift from Him to thou.”
                                    from  [Not Yet Have I Begun The Poem of My Heart.]n
p 2
                        The
poet moves from the first person speaking to perhaps God, or Christ,
                        and
then moves to the thought of Him (Christ) as a resigning stance.  And
                        calls
this through not prayer or invocation to be a “great gift,” using thou
                        instead
of “You” at the end.  It is as if an
absent or aloof Christ is possible
                        to
believe through a thought, just a touch of memory, perhaps, and is then
                        a
great gift.  A deft sequence.                
                        The
woundedness of poets and artists (of faith) is apparent in “Out of the
Maelstrom 
                        and
Intro the Hagstrom.”
                        “Wounded
those years are 
                           when one finds one's steps”
                        “Wounded
those bodies brought to task
                          Should their memory worn plots of the Old
City...”
                        “Wounded
those ones who feel the wound
                          But not the body wounded,
                          Without the grey sky of dawn
                          To recall in a tiny cell of detachment
                          The steadfast calm of their agony.”
                        The
last two lines are quite striking:”to recall in a tiny cell of detachment/The
steadfast
                        calm
of their agony.” This also suggests the poet's or seer's position – detachment 
                        recalling,
and the stoicism he keeps in agony, while surveying all pain and pleasure.
                        On
a more lyrical note, the poem “Wave” which also seems more modern somehow in 
                        its
diction because it plays with the meaning of the word “wave,” and its possible 
                        variants.  A wave could mean hello or goodbye, wave as
that gesture of moving one's
                        forearm
and hand back and forth.  The other wave
could be like a wavelength or a
                        wave
of water in the sea,  i.e. large ripple,
etc.  
                        In
a turn towards humor he writes:
                        “Don't
wave at me with your mouth full
                          I don't know whether you're waving or eating.
P 17
                        And
ends more solemnly with:
                        “Not
you but your wave I felt secure with
                        Your
wave wasn't eating
                        You
were
                        Your
wave wouldn't let your brother hunger.” 
p. 7
                        Thus
separately the goodwill of the gesture or wave, 
from the body its attached to,
                        ingesting
mere food, but food necessary to prevent hunger, another state of deprivation. 
                        It
is so also, in the “light verse” of [I'm Not Touched an Inch by Your
Salamander”]
                        which
ends:
                        '
                        You
assume I'm syncopated like the wind.”
                        Poems
such as th3ese are grace notes in a collection of mostly short,. 6-10 line
works
                        and
a few longer ones.  His poem, “Echo”
clearly speaks of reverberation of the                                                Crucifixion in a quite original
way.  As if speaking directly of Christ
in effigy:
                        “Without
an echo of your former truth alive
                         Alive out of memoryless waking you come
                         to hold the rack of Calvary.”  p. 12
                        Interesting
that he doesn't use the more direct and psychological sounding word,                                                “amnesia” but inste4ad, “alive out
of memoryless, waking you come....”  to
your
                        fate
of death.  Christ is awake but has no
memories of his life on earth as he takes
                        the
rack of Calvary.
                        For
those accustomed to more colorful scenery and objects and sensual modes and                               emotions from the “real world”or a real rather than
metaphysical riddle in their poetry,                            this
collection  may not suffice. But for any
with a yearning to explore theological                              equations
or dissonance within the framework of religious faith, I recommend this short                           volume of select poems
by the late Richard Darabaner. He paints in greys and blacks and                whites with the occasional splash
of sand or wave, beige or green.....
                        Reviewed
by Lo Galluccio
                        for
Ibbetson St. Press
                        www.logalluccio.weebly.com

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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