Friday, August 18, 2017

Ghazals 1-59 and Other Poems by Shelia E. Murphy and Michelle Greenblatt

Ghazals 1-59 and Other Poems

By Sheila E. Murphy and Michelle Greenblatt

Published by Unlikely Books, New Orleans, Louisiana

Review by Judy Katz-Levine

In this astonishing collaboration by the living poet Sheila E. Murphy and the deceased poet Michelle Greenblatt who suffered from fibromyalgia, a disease which did not keep her from writing with great passion, the formal structure of the ghazal, a signature of Sufi poets such as Rumi, is reinvented and brought to a contemporary American understanding.

The ghazal form was is as structured as a sonnet, and was often written during the 13th to 16th centuries in the Timurid empire by Sufi mystics.Traditionally, it is known to be composed of couplets between 12 and 15 lines. Murphy and Greenblatt create an alternative form of fifteen couplets per ghazal. While the first two lines of a traditional ghazal end in the same word, every other subsequent line ending in the same word as well, Murphy and Greenblatt play on repetition by taking turns in writing inventive couplets, and therein lies their interplay of form and repetitiion. The similarity between the Sufi ghazals of poets such as Rumi, Hafiz and Navoiy and these experimental longer explorative ghazals by Sheila Murphy and Michelle Greenblatt is one of passion. While the ghazals of Navoiy for example focus on the depth of love for the beloved even when scorned, elevating that to a metaphor for the divine, Murphy and Greenblatt translate that love into a passion for language, the surprise turns of language and image, the light of cognitive play. While Rumi for example would be closer to Lorca in feeling, the cognitive light given to these seamlessly woven couplets of Murphy and Greenblatt do more often reflect the passion of Shakespeare for cognitive delight in the movement of human insight. One also thinks of contemporary avant garde classical music, such as the works of John Cage in “Ocean Of Sound” or the composition of Morton Subotnick, “Silver Apples Of The Moon”.

Here is an example of the astonishing delight and surprise turns of image and thought manifested in Ghazals 1-59:

This quote is from Ghazal Seventeen:

“Look for the wind to gather you from port to prominence;
Landscape’s a deception so keep your camera ready.

The handwriting still runs across the page as if
Electric shock were prompting lines from the beyond.

Staccato overtime remainders figs and salt
Scattered on the late the waves of song rise and fall.”

The sheer inventiveness in language manifested in these 59 ghazals is highly unusual in contemporary poetry, despite our love for non-rhymed forms and discursive narratives. Murphy and Greenblatt love the element of surprise especially in image, and the musicality of both poets is so matched one to another that the true love and passion must be, here, the working together of these two poets, their intense connection, as they devoted themselves to this major project of creative leaps. Here is another couplet which explores existence in contemporary America and illustrates the highly musical lines and imagistic surprises of this collaboration:

Here is an excerpt from Ghazal Thirty-Six

“I owned a mountain full of stony slopes
And descended to exhume its dark past.

Labor exponentially prepares love
For the stains of eyelight squared upon roses.

Your code was more elegant than your word,
More picturesque than ample and not true.

Scented branches are the first clue of brushfire
Raging through the vicissitude of woods.”

Themes of nature are woven with theme of connection with other humans, and human activities, and there is only an occasional reference to the problem of violence in contemporary life. References to Greenblatt’s experiences with synesthesia are somewhat rare but are manifested in the sensuality of surprise evident throughout this collection with its multilayered reliance on sight, hearing, taste, touch, human emotion and intuition.

This is from ghazal Fifty:

“Simpler than blue, more resonant than all within the human
Is a color of inexpressible beauty, of mankind.

Buried in my chest, a weight that humbles
Crafts unmeasured space, still lingering.

Premises vanilla as no foreseeable infection leans
Towards chocolate being a flavor which many people love,

Under the cropped sun, the horizon sinks
Into syllables parallel to sky.”

Sheila Murphy and Michelle Greenblatt can be seen as explorers to a new continent of poetic form, and inventors supreme of language that pushes the boundaries of our senses and cognitive lights. This book, a work of great dedication, which was completed despite the illness of Greenblatt and her battle with pain and death, is a monument to creative invention in its pure form. It gives us the ghazal in a reincarnated state that is an available leap for all who love poetry, ancient and contemporary and explorative.

Judy Katz-Levine

The Sunday Poet: Melissa Castillo-Garsow

Melissa Castillo-Garsow

Melissa Castillo-Garsow is a Mexican- American writer, poet and scholar currently completing a postdoctoral fellowship at Harvard University.   

This poem is excerpted from her collection, Coatlicue Eats The Apple

From Part IV. 


He holds up an ear
caresses it lovingly
this is not just a crop
it's our culture, he says.

60 years of holding kernels
his hands are not yet tired
red, white, black, yellow
here are the ones he loves
the ones that grow
here. These are the mestizos
these are our culture, he says.

Here they say the first peoples
were made of Maiz
after clay after wood made only
ignorance and destruction.
Maiz made 4 men/ 4 women
with wisdom who populated the earth
and I believe them.
If people are 98% water
they must drink water.
We are maiz. So we eat
tortilla, tamale, pozole,

they tell him plant something else
they tell him work for someone else
they tell him use these hybrids

We are the most researched people in the world
and the least understood.

He doesn't need instruction on
what has fed for 8,000 years
He doesn't need US plants
he has created his criollos
strong roots that grow in rock shallow soils
and impossible humidity
His research is 50 years of knees
and hands and hearts in his soil
his land his feet covering
semilla after semilla watching
them grow year after year.

Not the scientist with 150 lands to report on
Not the gringo stopping by for a 1-day visit
Not the government who hands out wrong fertilizer
and corn that can't survive.

Grow quiet now. Hear that?
Es el conocimiento de los antepasados.

Grow quiet. Hear that.
It's the experience of 50 years
knee deep in dirt.

If you want to help, be quiet now.
They will bring the answers.

They will bring you the answers
in the rich texture of the criollo
the dark fibre of their soils
full of stubborn silences
and occasional roadblocks
and you can find it in
the shadows of their women.

The Aztec had a counterpoint
to Centeotl, the god of Maiz.
Chicomecoatl ruled over agriculture.
Before jade skirts and spiny belts
adorned the Maya queen of Maiz.

Now he says he stubborn.
I say he's pure mestizo Maiz
drawn from the Maya who jumped
to their death rather than
be conquered.

Maybe that's the way the world works.
Maybe it's not enough to say
ancestry, history, cultura, tradiciĆ³n
But maybe it's enough to stand upright
and tell the world:

We grow corn here.

Sunday, August 13, 2017

"Sunday Salon at Sonia." Poetry, Writers and More... September 10, 3-6 pm

Address: 10 Brookline St, Cambridge, MA 02139  Central Square

"Sunday Salon at Sonia."
September 10, 3-6 pm
An afternoon of musicians, poets, writers and more. Intermission includes refreshments and author book signings. Proceeds benefit
the Boston National Poetry Month Festival. Participants include:

Beth Bahia Cohen
(A master of bowed instruments from around the world, she has performed with Led Zeppelin, Itzhak Perelman, and Phillip Glass)

Kirk Etherton *
(Songwriter, poet, visual artist, free diver, etc., Kirk was recently featured on WGBH's "All Things Considered.")

Boyah J. Farah
(Somalian refugee-turned-writer, his work has been featured in The Guardian, Salon, National Public Radio, and elsewhere.)
Richard Hoffman
(Memoirist, fiction writer and poet, Richard teaches at Emerson and is former Chair of PEN New England.)

Lucy Holstedt *
(Berklee professor and leader of the Women Musicians Network concert; Lucy is also a poet, composer, and performer.)
Thea Hopkins
(An award-winning Americana singer-songwriter-guitarist, her song "Jesus is on the wire" was recorded by Peter, Paul & Mary.)

Daniel Hudon
(University lecturer in Astronomy and Mathematics, his latest book is "Brief Eulogies for Lost Animals: An Extinction Reader." )

Julian Meservey
(A gifted acoustic and electric guitarist, Julian is a graduate of Cornell and will enter Berklee this Fall.

Ada Ren
(Prolific creator of original and enduring things--from poetry and graphic design to clothing. She is currently at M.I.T.)

* On the board of the Boston National Poetry Month Festival.