Doug Holder Interviews poet Anne Pluto

The Sunday Poet: Syed Zaman

 

 Syed Zaman

Syed Zaman is a graduate of Sofia University and the Pennsylvania Academy of the Fine Arts.  He writes, "I currently work in academia at Harvard University. I enjoy exploring creativity through contemplative photography, drawing, word-play, and working as a creativity coach. While in constant engagement with writing, I feel words carrying me forward to places where I am able to articulate to myself that which helps refine a consciousness that is capable of registering the most minute changes in sensation and feeling through a sense of self with an enlarged sense of creative identity."

I Will Find You Again

Time disappears into a different 

Direction—a new meaning—the soul 

Continues to breathe through the 

Changing seasons—

Growing in silence—

Guiding the heart—as it grieves for 

What it has lost, as it gives away what 

Will never go away. 

Poet Caroline Moll will be the next Endicott College /Ibbetson Street Press Young Poet with her new book "Late Night Trains."

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About The Young Poet Series at Endicott College

In 2013 Doug Holder, founder of Ibbetson Street Press, and Dan Sklar, Creative Writing professor, started The Young Poet Series at Endicott College. Each semester an Endicott student will have their own poetry chapbook published by Ibbetson Street Press.
Emily Pineau, director and editor of The Young Poet Series, will work with each student as they prepare their manuscript.
The following poets have been published in The Young Poet Series (in order):
Emily Pineau, Meghan Perkins, Jason Roberts, Kimberly Pavlovich, Paige Shippie, Michael Goodwin, Alexandra Munteanu, Simrin Tamhane, and others...

 https://youngpoetseries.wordpress.com/

Interview with poet Kate Hanson Foster: Exploring her past in Lowell in her new collection “Mid Drift”

Kate Hanson Foster

Interview with poet Kate Hanson Foster: Exploring her past in Lowell in her new collection “Mid Drift”

with Doug Holder

Kate Hanson Foster is a fortyish woman with an easy smile and has an animated way of describing her passion—writing. Kate Hanson Foster's first book of poems, Mid Drift, was published by Loom Press and was a finalist for the Massachusetts Center for the Book Award in 2011. Her poetry has appeared in Comstock Review, Harpur Palate, Poet Lore, Tupelo Quarterly and elsewhere. She was recently awarded the NEA Parent Fellowship through the Vermont Studio Center. I had the pleasure to speak to Foster on my Somerville Community Media TV show  " Poet to Poet: Writer to Writer."

Doug Holder: In your new collection “Mid Drift,” the city of Lowell, MA. is a character in your writing—explain.

Kate Hanson Foster: Well—it is hard to explain. I grew up in a very Catholic household. I moved to Lowell for college—for my undergraduate years. I spent the entire duration of my twenties in Lowell. For me—living in Lowell, being in that sort of environment ( that was entirely new to me), exposed me to a lot of harsh realities of city life. I was from a suburb of Boston—Andover. So my being in Lowell was sort of redefining moment for me spiritually. At the time—from 2000 to 2009—everything in the city was being renovated—mill buildings, streets, etc... So Lowell was a character for me like anything else. When you talk about place or a subject—there is a presence there—whether or not you want to admit it. I was always latching on to that sense of presence. It was almost a God -like thing.

DH: You went through some hardscrabble times there.

KHF: Yeah. Definitely. Like I said-- I encountered a lot of things I never saw before: prostitution, homelessness—things you didn't see in Andover. Lowell has a sort of energy. It has a great history and backstory. That's why the energy lingers. That's why I chose to live in the city—it was my muse.

DH: You had a wonderful poem about your grandmother who was succumbing to Alzheimer's disease. You sort of focus the poem down to her throat.

KHF: That poem was a hard one to write. My grandmother was on her last legs. That poem deals with her becoming just a body—just a machine that was wheeled around. She was losing herself. These were the last moments of herself.

DH : Your language in the poem is stripped down—nothing florid. Would you characterize this as your style?

KHF: It is my feeling of language. My dad plays a guitar—my words are my guitar. I know how to strum the chords at the right time. I love lyrical language, and plainspoken too.

DH: You seemed to have moved away from Lowell in your new work.

KHF: I live in Groton now. I got married and had three children. It changes everything. But I was happy to move on. There is a time and place for everything. It makes you think about your voice as a writer. I am no longer writing for me. I am emotionally split—I have a family.

DH: Does domesticity help or hinder you as a poet?

KHF: It does both. I mean after my third child I experienced depression. I had to make sense of things so I incorporated motherhood into my writing. I write about the self, family and people—this has been a bridge to a new phase of my writing.

DH: You got your MFA from the Bennington Writing Seminars. How was the experience?

KHF. Great. Major Jackson was the first writer I worked with. Everyone was a great help in their own ways.

DH: Can you talk about your affiliation with the Loom Press of Lowell?

KHF: Paul Marion—who founded the press—has an unbelievable commitment to the cultural life of Lowell. I knew him. It was natural to go to him about publishing this book—that concerned Lowell. Once you publish with Loom—you are part of the family.

Mill City

No human echo—
Just a hum that drips from the street
wires, a pulse that lets loose
from the glass of vacant storefronts.
My mind is filthy with old, dear secrets.
Another room sinks into its pine boards
and someone comes to assign value;
pull sewage out of the canal.
So much left over from so much
ordinary life.
I am seduced
by the red X on buildings
where no one bothers. Another ceiling
gives in and my gutters fill.
It is the unlit room,
the windowpane that keeps hold
of that flat ochre light.
It is absence.
And not even post and beam can escape
the flutter of that grey wing.
A crack opens another foundation—
Something in the flesh trying to beat its way out.
Just watch it go.

The Sunday Poet: Susan Tepper

Poet Susan Tepper

Susan Tepper has been a writer for twenty years. Her stories, poems, interviews and essays have been published extensively worldwide. An award-winning author, Tepper has been nominated multiple times for the Pushcart Prize and once for a Pulitzer Prize for the novel. 'Let's Talk' her column at Black Heart Magazine runs monthly. FIZZ her reading series at KGB Bar, NYC, has been ongoing for eight years. Before settling down to study writing, Tepper worked as an actor, singer, flight attendant, marketing manager, tour guide, television producer, interior decorator, rescue worker and more

Give

If you don’t have cash

to spare

give an apple, anyone can

afford one apple, or

maybe a muffin,

a corn muffin for a

stomach on a cold night

anyone could,

Or maybe you could

give a coat

you never wear anymore

stuffed in the dusty

back of your closet, there

must be sweaters and jackets

back in there, too,

you could give

gathering cobwebs

you could shake off

in the fresh air,

you could give a scarf or

peaches in a can,

anyone could

spare a can of cling peaches

from inside your cupboard,

smashed against other cans and

spices and crinkly bags of

pasta, maybe you could give

a sandwich, some meat and cheese

between two slices

of bread, anyone could

give a sandwich.

So many things

lying about you could give

without missing

a single beat.

Filched Poems by James Tolan

Filched

Poems by James Tolan

Loveland, Ohio

www.dosmadres.com

ISBN: 978-1-939929-79-2

69 Pages

Review by Dennis Daly

Without an intermediary, a thickly (or at least thinly) constructed persona to absorb sentiment’s backwash, confessional poetry often erodes and collapses of its own weight. Some of it can be downright dangerous. In his new book, Filched, James Tolan avoids that pathetic destructiveness using tonal restraint, irony, and damn good storytelling. Each poem Tolan breathes onto his pages burns with a purloined joy, freed from time’s untoward tyranny.

In his poem, The Big Sleep, Tolan summarizes his father’s last ambulance ride to the crematorium in some detail. Since the poet had opted to stay in Brooklyn at his teaching job during the funeral rites, he could not really know the particulars first hand. His absence generates the ambiguous emotional power that drives the poem. Like many who grieve by fixing their attention on a seemingly random oddity, the poet remembers the book that he had been teaching his class—Raymond Chandler’s The Big Sleep. He uses this book to order and give meaning to the dysfunctional apathetic world surrounding him. Here is the juxtaposition that conferred significance on Chandler’s book,  

Some hospital joe  wheeled him down the long, white hall,

            While Santa Anas  spilled desert across the town.

            While I ducked the rain in Brooklyn, my collar against the storm,

            sodden strangers  plunging with me to the train,

            an ambulance drove him slowly  to where the fires blaze,

            hot enough to roast  flesh and bone to scrap and ash.

            While undertakers readied  to fit him for the flames,

            I taught  the book  that I had plucked

            From the rack beside his Lazy Boy.

            He told me to take it, if I wanted.

            He was done, tired of Chandler anyway.

           

            On a fall day in Vegas, strong winds whipping in,

                        Tourists went on laying down their bets

According to Tolan the River Styx has nothing on Waukegan Harbor in Lake Michigan. The harbor apparently has a great view of Zion nuclear plant (now decommissioned). His cautionary piece, Tag, promises to a bunch of boys playing on the beach a paradise to come on the opposite shore in the form of “loose-limbed girls.” But, like all paradises promised, falls terribly short. One of their number claimed to have travelled there and, disbelieved, is pelted with dead fish during a game of tag. Deadly irony and unchildlike horror conclude the poem,

Allied against his all too certain lies’

we bore what arms were given us

            and fired

the rank corpses that fit so nicely

into the empty pockets of our hands.

Bombarded, he wailed and snarled,

            Fish-stung from the beach.

Our ammunition caked with sores,

we wiped our hands off on the sand,

            the sand off on our jeans,

and went on, half hearts denying

            all of us were It.

Filched, the title poem of Tolan’s collection, works wonderfully, both tugging the reader’s heart-strings and engaging his or her intellect with show-stopping irony. The poet chose a perfect metaphor, his father’s old watch. Moments of pathos seem to implode into great complexity. The poet craves love’s time, but settles for a memento, a timekeeper. He fabricates his life as it should be, using his father’s swiped watch as both anchor and proof. Tolan describes his childhood crime this way,

I found it among tie pins and cufflinks in his top drawer,

filched it years before I knew the word,

            knew only that I wanted something I could take from him

            who knew work and the bar better than home,

            something I would have never called

            beautiful and ruined.  

Crystal scratched, leather dry and stitching frayed.

He never noticed it was gone

Boyhood, as I remember it, sparked with adventure and marvel. Imagination could transform the intimate into the epic. But there was a dangerous downside. Not all of us made it through those years. These were the days before well-meaning helicopter parents stifled the rough and tumble coming of age rituals of young males. Perhaps saving some, but weakening the genetic trajectory of many more. With this in mind, Tolan’s brave poem, A Wild Rumpus, after one of the boys pours gasoline on the play-battlements, ends in an affecting parental prayer,

… he doused

the ungarded enemy fortifications

with the contents of that quart

then torched it with a Bic. My team

commenced to hooting and high stepping.

Even the losers joined in, two armies

circling the flames. This the happiest

I’d ever seen sober people be: boys disarmed

around a fire lapping blankets and dry wood.

Angels of infernos and safe distance,

be as kind to my boy. Lead him to joy

and sanctuary from joy burst into flame.

In another meditation on boyhood entitled Junuh at Nine, Tolan considers his evolving relationship with his son, Junuh. He balances his responsibilities with Junuh’s need for independence and a sense of self. The poem has a good feel about it. Despite the poet’s obvious closeness to his subject, he manages a  tonal objectivity that intellectually affirms life and fate. I like this piece a lot. Tolan opens his argument thoughtfully,

My son has begun to set out on his own,

to form allegiances with friends

whose secrets he, by age-old code,

            is compelled to keep.

His world more and more his alone.

Already, Jordan has broken a boy’s arm.

Daquan was caught at recess with a blade.

Jesse pummeled Andre. And Junnuh

            has no idea how

his fake leather coat was torn.

Uplifting and victorious, Tolan’s poems transport the reader through the real world of sensitivity and timelessness. Mortality holds no sway here. With each reading this gritty collection offers solace as it draws one further into its whirlwind confrontation of everyday humanity. Tolan, who unfortunately died this year, lives within his books and deserves our profound prayerful gratitude. 

       

For Want of Water by Sasha Pimentel

 

For Want of Water

by Sasha Pimentel

ISBN 9780807027851

Beacon Press

Boston, Massachusetts

Review by Wendell Smith

Sasha Pimentel has anchored this uneven collection with a substantial appendix: "Lines I’ve Stolen, and Other Notes," as if we might drift with these poems into a sea of vague references unless we were given lots of ancillary and factual information. So, whether you find her to be a good poet or a mature one will depend upon whether you are inclined to quote the apocryphal, “bad poets imitate; good poets steal,” attributed to TS Eliot or what he actually wrote, “Immature poets imitate, mature poets steal.” I do commend these notes for their honesty; they reveal that the best lines in the collection, "as freezing persons recollect the snow:/first chill, then stupor, then the letting go," are Emily Dickenson’s, stolen (Sasha’s word) from “After great pain, a formal feeling comes —” to conclude her poem “Grave, ma non troppo tratto.” Unfortunately the implication of these notes, that the poet has an interest in accuracy, creates an expectation that is often unfulfilled, beginning with the first lyric of the collection, "If I Die in Juarez."

Her casual attention to detail in this first lyric undercuts its power. I give you the complete poem because I feel it is only fair to the poet and to you that I give you enough data to assess the validity of my rant.

When violins in our home are emptied

of sound, strings stilled, missing

fingers. This one can bring a woman down

to her knees, just to hear again

it's voice, thick as a callus

from the wooden belly. This one strings

are broken. And another, open,

as a mouth. I want to kiss

them as I hurt to be kissed, ruin

their brittle necks in the husk of my palm,

my fingers across the bridge, pressing

chord into chord, that delicate protest –:

my tongue rowing the frets, and our throats high

from the silences of keeping.

"My tongue rowing the frets," is a line that triggered my criticism of her craft; violins don't have frets. (If they did, how would a tongue row them!?) Did she choose violins as her metaphor without bothering to acquire a basic familiarity with them? And because of these lines, "my fingers across the bridge, pressing/chord into chord," I doubt that she knows how the instrument is played. Yes, a violin does have a bridge; it elevates the strings above the fingerboard, or top of the violin’s neck, so when you arch your fingers over the neck (not across the bridge) and press the strings to the fingerboard, you vary the vibrating length of strings and change their pitch. What is frustrating about this poem is that this metaphor could have served her purpose if only she had been observant and accurate. I give you my clumsy example of what she might have said, "my fingers massaged the neck pressing chord into chord," (or cord into cord) which would have turned the violin’s strings into the the neck cords of victims to produce the musical “chords” of mourning (or of the morning). Am I unfair to demand that once she chooses her metaphor, which I think we can agree has potential, that she has an obligation to use it with precision?

This poem also demonstrates another problem for this collection caused by the way she anchors the poetry to her notes. In them, after she informs us that the namesake for the title of that first poem is Stella Pope Duarte's novel, If I Die in Juarez, she carries on for some 200 words to give us facts about the killings of young women around Juarez and elsewhere in Mexico. Of course these facts are awful and deserving of our attention but I felt they are used here as emotional blackmail, that if I don’t praise these poems for their lamentations for injustice, I must be a philistine. This attempt to make her subject the reason to appreciate her poetry brought to mind these lines by Jack Gilbert: … “To make injustice the only/measure of our attention is to praise the Devil.”ⁱ Would that she had honored that truth and spent as much time examining violins and how they are played as she spent examining the journalism about her subject, and then let the journalism go so the poem could speak for itself.

Here is another example of her lack of precision this time in her use of language in “Old Beds and Hollywood,”

… My father

slumbered so loudly I could

never hear my mother's

sleep …

* * *

all joists trembled to him

from behind the plaster,

Those aren't joists behind the plaster they are studs. Her father’s room may have joists beneath the floor and joists above the ceiling plaster but it would have had studs behind the plaster of the walls. And if you don’t believe me go to a dictionary as I (not wanting to trust my years as a carpenter) did and she should have. And because she didn’t she missed the ironic pun of having her father make studs tremble, even as he slept.

Frustrated by how often I found myself going “?!” about poems (tongue rowing, vide supra) in this celebrated collection (it is one of five winners in the National Poetry Series for 2016) I went to the title poem, "For Want of Water." There I found evidence for why this poetry has garnered praise and awards. But even this poem begins with another distracting error, “an ant will drown himself.” Ants are female; these first lines should read, “an ant will drown herself, her body, etc.” This inaccuracy would be trifling were it not that she is so careful in her notes to let us know that the poem is based on a fact: “On August 2, 2006, the El Paso Times reported a case where a 13-year-old boy, Julio Hernandez, dragged his dead mother through the desert after she’d collapsed.” Once I got by the male ant of the first three lines, (ironically, because it is a mother who is dead, these lines would have been more powerful if she had gotten the sex of the ant correct) this poem showed that she can transform journalism into powerful poetry:

an ant will drown himself, his body submerging

into ease, his mandibles, head, antennae, baptized. How lovely

to lose your senses to the cup of your want. A boy

drags his mother's body across the desert, her fluids rising

to heaven in order to quench her skin. How divine

her body must have looked, clutched at the ankles, her

arms reaching out in exultation, her head stippled in rings

of sand and blood as he walked with her, slowly, her fallen

and moving shape the fork of a divining rod, her body shaking

with each of his steps, and for water, shaking to find

that deep and secret tributary.

Those lines confirm that this collection of Pimentel’s does have its genius. If you approach it with a will to dig away like the optimistic boy on the manure pile who felt “there must be horses in here somewhere,” you will find poems that are horses. I found some, but came away from this collection thinking that Sasha Pimentel needs to find some one to help her clean the stall, find someone who will be to her what Maxwell Perkins was to Thomas Wolfe.

Finally for the record here are those lines used by Ms. Pimentel to conclude “Grave, ma non troppo tratto.” as they appear in The Complete Poems of Emily Dickenson,” edited by Thomas H. Johnson, our best guess for how Emily would have wanted them to appear in print:

As Freezing persons, recollect the Snow —

First — Chill — then Stupor — then the letting go —

I think they answer the question posed by T. S. Eliot’s statement. The altering of the capitalization and punctuation as they appear in For Want of Water means they are not stolen; they are imitated.

i“Brief for the Defense” in Refusing Heaven, by Jack Gilbert, Knopf, New York, 2007

Doug Holder Interviews Poet Scott Ruescher--Video

  I interviewed Ruescher on my Poet to Poet Writer to Writer show at the Somerville Media Center.

Interview with Israel Horovitz with Doug Holder

  Here is an excerpt of an interview I did with playwright, filmmaker Israel Horovitz. This was several years back when he had a new book of poetry out.  He also released the movie " My Old Lady" with Kevin Kline and Maggie Smith.  at this time...

The Sunday Poet: William Doreski

Poet William Doreski

William Doreski lives in Peterborough, New Hampshire. He has published three critical studies. His poetry has appeared in many journals. He has taught writing and literature at Emerson, Goddard, Boston University, and Keene State College. His new poetry collection is A Black River, A Dark Fall (Splash of Red, 2018).

Drafts of Autumn

The drafts of autumn arrive,

trailing scraps of tropical storm

from the Gulf where small cities

have curdled along the shore.

You want to hang out laundry

for the last sun-dry of the year,

but the sun has lost its fervor

for casting lattice-works of shade,

and has stayed in bed this morning,

defying custom and science.

We should pack a lunch and drive

to that museum where Homer’s

seascapes open depths greater

than we experience in life.

Or we should stroll by a lake

inlaid with cloud mosaics

too complex for the eye to parse.

The logic of bedrock underlies

everything we do or don’t do

and leaves us with chilly mouths.

The drafts, blown by angels

or devils, from west or north,

flutter the most fragile tissues

even if they’re framed behind glass.

Do you want to say home and ply

the layers of indecencies

to learn their obtuse language?

We still have the textbook shelved

where we left off reading halfway

from the Indus and Yellow rivers.

Not all the rag or scrap or tatters

in our world can stifle drafts

blown from such tangential distance.

We might as well accept the logic

of painting the sea in motion

and drink from those cloudy lakes

until we’re sated enough to drift

away on the loss of our shadows

and become the landscapes we admire.