By
Chad Parenteau
FootHills
Publishing
Kanona,
New York
71
Pages
$16.00
Review
by Dennis Daly
Minimalist
poems, like those in Patron Emeritus by Chad Parenteau, imbue each word with a
density of meaning that demands resolution and balance. Without careful
calibrations stanzas would fall off the page and punctuation could explode.
Parenteau not only avoids these pitfalls but successfully plays off the tension
created by them. At heart these poems are narrative, although the stories,
culled from the common experience of day-to-day living, the poet rubs raw,
dices, compresses, and then highly polishes.
Parenteau,
who hosts the famous and long-running Stone Soup poetry readings in Cambridge
Massachusetts, connects with the deceased originator of that venue, Jack
Powers, in his first poem. There is sensitivity here and also a not unexpected
validation. The poet says,
Thought
I saw you
walking
taller, talking clearer
nearby
crutches
lady
at your table
cowboy
hat
ten
gallon paladin
head
weighed
nodding
toward me.
In
the poem entitled Manifesto Parenteau navigates two different venues of
performance poetry with unabashed excitement and, interestingly enough, admits
to liking the comfort and inclusion of committee work. Of course society is
really a set of self-appointed committees so why not. Here are the pertinent
lines,
I
strafe both sides
one-way
streets
run
down
running
crop
circles
slim
pickings.
Committees
agree
I
do my best work
when
in committee
belonging
still…
I
like the use of the crop circle image. Like some open-mike participants they
appear suddenly at night and take surprising shapes.
Even
charged language can be funny. In Parenteau’s piece Come Lately the
persona-host of a poetry reading venue is at his wit’s end on a particularly
bad night. I’m guessing Stone Soup. Here’s how the poem begins,
Scant
showing
only
host pays
success
insisted on.
Those
closest
edge
forget
no
hands
left
to hold
outreach
let
alone signal
help
what
they know
malady.
Of
course the production of a comedic scene is at the host’s expense and due to his
very earnestness and caring nature.
Another
humorous poem entitled Working Late struts out longer lines and a less
compressed syntax. It is one of a handful of exceptions to the poet’s
prevailing style. The poet’s persona, making a living like the rest of us,
works in a lab. His duties include prepping hamster cages. But in reality our
poet thinks subversively and has other agendas. He identifies with the
intruder, the outsider. I’m shocked! The poem ends this way,
…the
empty cages always need
water
freshened, new shavings every week,
more
if we have a visit
from
the department head.
Sometimes
I’ll mess things up,
leave
a cage door open, watch eyes,
mouse
braving the climb to
the
desktop,
pupils
growing large
while
sniffing my similar stare
before
scurry escapes.
Any
worker worth his salt knows how to hide from his boss and steal precious
moments of humanity through imagination or creativeness. The poet in his piece
Passing has chosen one of the most common of all havens—the bathroom. Parenteau
describes his sanctuary,
Bosses
wait for
bidden
bathroom
you
rinse meeting off
face, unsmear specs.
They
know you
trespasser
door
closing there
they
are
talking
by door
cordially
predatoral…
The
poem Air Lines begins with the passengers vaguely fearing discovery and
surrendering their metallic implements and ends with their expected arrival in
Pittsburgh, the city built on the melting of metals and its own factory-employed
citizens. Parenteau catches the unease felt by many air travelers perfectly. In
this context even nature’s controls become dangerously businesslike. The poet
explains,
travelers
cringe at thought
added
contact, padded shells
hard
complimentary cashews
muttering
minor turbulence
as
if nature were bureaucracy
bringing
us to Pittsburgh
another
mill town in search
of
purpose its people long
melted
down
Another
airport terminal. Another flawed city. The poem Not In Denver attributes
Parenteau’s unpleasant work experiences to the soullessness of his
surroundings. His world weariness is evident. Yet his observations, wry visions,
and the way he holds fire at the end seem to imply future hope. Here’s the
conclusion,
World
like
Pseudo-Denver
forget
face
looking
between alarm
clock
stings
hand
smashed poise.
Revolving
doors
state
soul
water
bodies
looked
nice
all
I’ll say.
Parenteau
romps over the page in the poem Phoning In. His sparse wording hits all the
right notes. The poet’s persona calls in sick. His attitude mixes anger, wit,
imagination, and misery. The misery seems to be more job-related than
illness-related. Here’s how the poet starts off,
Calling
sick
citing
teeth marks,
yesterday’s
wolves.
Shoulder
bites
sting
more recalling
pat
shoulders.
The
point again? Explain
more
they ask your
chewed
foot.
The
title poem, Patron Emeritus, deserves to be the title poem. It speaks to
Everyman. A poet must make do as a citizen of life. He faces internally as an
artist must, but he also must deal with the external and, in that realm, hug,
revisit, forgive, and remain his own person. A coffee shop represents the
universal backdrop of the poet’s existence. As patron emeritus he settles in
for the duration in spite of past difficulties. In a steadying voice Parenteau
briefs us on how it feels,
Sitting
down
finally
unfamiliar
feels
immune.
The
manager said
Your
firing was inevitable.
Ask
for him
Demand
halves
Take
everything…
Like
gem stones the hard knocks of life shine with intensity from these accomplished
poems. Get yourself a coffee. Make sure the boss is not around. Then read this
book.