Poems by Martin
Willitts Jr.
Copyright 2012 by
Martin Willitts, Jr.
Kattywompus Press
Cleveland Heights
OH
Softbound, 28
pages, $12
ISBN 1936715171
Review by Zvi A.
Sesling
Martin Willitts
Jr’s latest chapbook How To Make Peace
tries to find hope or uncover despair amid the carnage of conflict. Two poems
in the book on facing pages best exemplify this
dichotomy.
Music in the
Battlefield
Based on the
water color, “The Piper of Dreams”
by Estella Louisa Michaela Conziani, 1914
In the lull
between the shooting,
I played my flute
so quietly
music notes were
blackberries.
For a moment, the
fields were silent, my song
drifting across
barbed wire, broken wheels, dying
split open
horses, to the men agonizing,
cauterizing their
wounds.
The quiet finds
what needs to be lifted up,
and lifts it.
Killing Fields
“When broken
glass floats” – Cambodian proverb
They plant our
bodies like grain.
We are mixed with
lime.
Our skin browns
the ground.
Our skeletons
make the earth’s chest rise and fall.
This is what it
is like to be worth
less than an
empty field
when tears of the
defeated are glass,
and everything is
broken.
Willitts’s poems
could be about any war. The first being the Civil War, Spanish American War or
perhaps inspired not only by the painting, but by Tennyson’s “Charge of the
Light Brigade.” War brings the need for something uplifting to the men and
women who are caught up in it and as the second poem intimates it could be
non-combatant civilians as well, especially those who suffered in Southeast
Asia, or Nicaragua or El Salvador or perhaps those suffering from the so-called
Arab Spring which is turning more and more into a cold, dead winter in the
countries where uplifting has given way to the broken.
In Protocol For
Primates, Willitts shows us that gorillas have more precise rules of peace and
war than their homo sapien counterparts, while the opening lines of the title
poem warns that perhaps animals should not trust humans:
“I know the glow
of benevolence when I see it./It is easily recognized by the wild animals./They
come willingly to you without regret/trusting what they should not.”
The poem, based
on Quaker author Edwards Hicks’ “Peaceable Kingdom,” goes on to negate the
looming threat against the wild and replace it with his definition of trust.
And as Willitts often does in his poems it ends with his (our?) happiness.
Another poem,
“Forty Years Later” is dedicated to Cervena Barva Press publisher/editor Gloria
Mindock whose poetry on the Eastern European model is often dark and with the
exception of the
last line is similar to one of her poems.
This was such an adept way of exploring the carnage of war without going off the deep end, making graceful what otherwise is anything but. It goes to show that Willitts is versatile enough to handle both the grim and more lighthearted sides of the human experience. For someone seeking a less bloody poem, I could recommend this one: http://empiricalmag.blogspot.com/2012/12/from-empirical-archives-l-is-for-lichen.html. It has the same rhythm and style but a much different tone.
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