High
Tide
By
Ed Meek
Aubade
Publishing
Aubadepublishing.com
Ashburn,
VA
ISBN:
978-1-951547-99-8
80
Pages
Review
by Dennis Daly
Holding
court in his realm by the sea, Ed Meek mines the details from every corner of
his kingdom for poetic nuggets that teach and transform. The raw materials
include mushrooms and ethnic sensibilities, a mythological crossing guard, family
memories, meatballs pertaining to human nature, and barbarian children. Meek is
a veritable Everyman (in the medieval, morality play sense). His upwardly mobile
progress, as he negotiates around or through annoying obstacles, is toward
goodness and evolution’s steady continuity.
Nor
does Meek avoid intellectual confrontation. He seems to welcome it. In Meek’s
world understanding must precede judgment. But judge he certainly does. Even
time bends to his moral percipience as he retrospectively determines when and
where childhood happiness reaches its pinnacle.
Meek’s
poem Hunting Mushrooms with Mina delights with a tour de force of description
and mystery. Mina is Sioux and knows what she is doing. The poet’s persona is
along for the ride. As the two seekers uncover and collect their savory dinner
of morels, they seem to exchange wordless tension back and forth with a bit of
playfulness. The poet’s keen senses and black humor flirt with fantasies of
danger and historical fact. Here is the descriptive heart of the poem,
…
She lifted leaves
and
poked through thatch
to
find them crouching in damp quarters,
secreted
in moss and duff. They were
long-dead
shrunken dwarfs
buried
in their hats, their bodies
a
stump beneath their shaggy, fetid heads.
They’d
wept for years and moist riverbeds
Coursed
down their spongy faces.
“What
about these?” I asked
Pointing
to a yellow disk, speckled with white freckles.
“Death
cap,” she said. “I can poison you with that.”
Her
long black hair reflected light and my eye
caught
the tip of the blade
she
kept on her hip.
Meek
has a knack for hiding horror in the comfort of everyday images. In his piece
entitled The Crossing Guard the poet unveils the mythological Charon, known for
his transportation of the newly dead across the River Styx, in his training
role as Crossing Guard guiding children across a neighborhood street. Here is
the lead-in stanza to the metamorphosis,
With
hands as old as vines twisted by time
he
holds the divine red lollypop—
its
simple command in four black letters.
When
he raises his arm, bikes cars, and trucks
like
well-trained soldiers grind to a halt
as
he ferries the children across the dangerous divide.
High
Tide, the title poem of Meek’s collection portrays his younger self set in an
idyllic family composition. His father doubles as Elvis Presley. His mother
looks the part of majorette marching down a football field. It’s perfect! Well,
not exactly. Meek’s uses omniscience and irony to convey a prelude to the
coming change of fortune. Snap shots of life are momentary and often deceiving,
that is, until connected with context. The word play is quite clever. Consider
the heart of the poem,
My
father held me up
in
the water and my mother
waved
from her beach blanket
on
the sand. This was before
the
brothers and sisters, those
uninvited
guests, crashed
the
party, back when my mother
was
fun to be around
and
my father was glad
to
be home from the war,
working
the only job
he
would ever have.
While
reading the above lines it also occurred to me that high tide temporarily
protects a whole swathe of shore and water creatures that live on the edge.
When the tide ebbs weaknesses and vulnerabilities appear for all to see.
Predators, of course, know this. Meek also knows this and ponders the fragility
of family life.
Expectations
play a significant part in the way we read literature. Perhaps poetry
especially. A remembered tone may pull us in. Perhaps a hardscrabble story of
working stiffs grabs us. Next the details may enchant our sensitivities with
their unexpected simplicity. Finally, we look for the denouement and uplifting
catchall. Meeks slyly removes this last element in his poem How to Make
Meatballs and substitutes a more diabolical and witty ending that smacks of
life’s true realities. The poet concludes his poem,
The
meatballs baked while I fried
eggs,
bacon, and home fries
for
the working girls and drunks
who
stumbled in.
This
was before Tony went away
for
printing twenties in his basement,
before
Joey broke in and stole our TV,
and
the bank took their house.
Sometimes
goodness can only be defined against a background of its opposite inclination.
In his poem Miss Maloney, Meek’s persona teases out a moralistic outrage from
his readers using memories of welled up juvenile cruelty. Meek’s classmates perpetrate
this meanness against their inexperienced but well-meaning fifth grade teacher.
The poet joins the classroom festivities with gusto. His over the top
description signals his own disgust at his collaboration. The piece opens by
setting the stage,
A
doll, my mother proclaimed,
after
meeting Miss Maloney
the
new fifth grade teacher.
Just
out of Bridgewater State Teacher’s College,
an
eraser over five feet tall,
natural
blond hair in a bun,
blue
eyes in a field of freckles.
Smiling,
she invited us
to
set goals for the year.
At
recess, our war council convened.
We
aimed to make her cry
for
being so pretty and perky.
Throughout
these well-structured poems Meek champions an almost Aristotelian sense of
goodness and moral rectitude. His unabashed didactic bent seems unforced and
infused with humility and a happiness born of intellectual truths. The word
“organic” comes to mind. `Refreshing. Very refreshing.
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