Saturday, March 08, 2025

You are Leaving the American Sector: Love Poems by Rebecca Foust

 

You are Leaving the American Sector: Love Poems


Rebecca Foust,
Backbone Press, 2024



47 pages


Review by Rick Mullin

Rebecca Foust’s new chapbook of poems has a strange prescience. Conceived during her re-reading of George Orwell’s 1984 during the pandemic, it frames the first Trump administration in the context of that novel’s mass manipulation via thought control, Newspeak, and assigned hatreds for the purpose of enforced obeisance to Big Brother. Arriving just prior to Trump’s election to a non-consecutive second term, You Are Leaving the American Sector: Love Poems also writes history forward.

 
Foust is certainly not alone in connecting the Trump years, 2016 - 2020, to Orwell’s dystopia. The connection is obvious. Slightly more hyperbolic at the time were the many comparisons of Trump to Hitler. The latter, after Trump’s first few weeks back in office, are a little more compelling, given the establishment of camps for deportees, the president’s Anschluss dreams regarding Canada, and the growing popularity of the Nazi salute. Meanwhile the upside-down world of 1984 is perfectly replicated in the administration’s assertion that president Volodymir Zelensky of Ukraine is a dictator and that Ukraine started the war with Russia.

 
But Foust is not belaboring easy comparisons. Poems in the collection, which takes its name from the sign at Checkpoint Charlie in West Berlin during the Cold War, hold an authoritarian regime’s feet to the fire on its many lies and violations of democracy and human decency, casting a keen eye on how language and silence have been tortured such that an obvious con man is viewed by over half the electorate (this time) as the savior of a great nation. It’s a sharply pointed, whole-hearted J’Accuse put forward in the truthful and persuasive language of poetry.
 
Like 1984, You Are Leaving the American Sector: Love Poems is also a love story and the saga of an individual trying to fashion a future from the demolition of the past. The first poem, “Prologue: Water” introduces us to a world in which there is no more water other than what exists in “State cisterns”. The landscape is concrete and ruins, and its inhabitants, under the eye of Big Brother, suffer amidst the devastation and loss: 



We used

to have inner rooms to retreat to,

but now every wall is a screen 

with a lens looking in.







The narrator’s hopes are expressed in a dream of rain, of roads going anywhere there are mountains and springs. In a sequel to the dream, she is reunited in a monsoon with a lover whose mutual betrayal immediately precedes the vanishing of water. The monsoon evokes a longing for interior space, an ocean inside.
 
The narrator, an alter ego of the character Julia in 1984, refers to the fluidity and absence of nature throughout the collection. In “Plague”, a poem set during Covid lockdown, she is overwhelmed by birds arriving at a newly-hung bird feeder. The onslaught has her feeling infinitesimally small, one cell in a body / one word in the Iliad. And it reminds her of the frightful death toll in the early months of the pandemic, a nightly knell of names/ read aloud, whereupon she conjures the memorable line in “Burial of the Dead”, the first section of Eliot’s “The Waste Land”: I had not thought death had undone so many.


In the first section of her book, “World State of Ford 632 / USA-2016-24”, Foust lays out the tenants of contemporary Newspeak. The poem “Where This is Leading” begins with an epigraph from Orwell’s novel: Who controls the past… controls the future: who controls the present controls the past. It describes the pride Julia’s soon-to-be lover Winston Smith takes in revising history at the Ministry of Truth, as well as the mechanism of the Big and Small Lie:






…when our leader



tells obvious lies, even small ones,




it teaches us to mistrust our own senses & frays



the fabric of our shared reality—





The following poem, “Rally Insurrection” playfully illustrates the machinations of the Ministry of Truth (renamed, according to a headnote, Truth Social, the social media site Donald Trump launched after he was bounced from Twitter). The poem is an edited news brief reporting on the January 26, 2021, attack on the U.S. Capitol.

They peacefully assembled at stormed the Capitol Building,



carrying cell phones and water bottles guns, pipe bombs, Molotov



cocktails, knives, axes, lead pipes, bats, chemical sprays,

zip ties, and rope used to erect a gallows.

The crossed-out arsenal here is an echo of the litany in Bob Dylan’s song “Jokerman”, one that prefigures our contemporary landscape with




Nightsticks and water cannons, tear gas, padlocks
Molotov cocktails and rocks behind every curtain



Poems that follow show how subtle adjustments to diction and line breaks strategically distort meaning, and how silence born of confusion comes in response to something as insidious as the January 6 insurrection.


Section two of the collection, “Julia & Winston”, shifts focus to the lovers’ subversive relationship, describing a small private world of resistance. Much of it is told from Julia’s perspective, beginning in “How it Begins” with the artificial nature in Winston’s initial overture.







He picks posies for her 



on his portable telescreen,



with captions like
lovelies for the lovely.







Winston eventually turns to poetry, repeatedly reading poems to Julia until he can recite them “verbatim”. In “Another Life” Julia’s dream world becomes more active in its retreat from the concrete and confusion all around her.







In another life, I am home



to plant & weed & pick, my fruit
does not rot on the tree…



… I swim & swim & swim…



In (the dream), I am not ashamed










Nature imagery flourishes as Julia’s imagination becomes her reality, one defined by visions such as the rectangular patterns of light in a hideaway room with the white rhomboids of moon / thrown on the bare floorboards in “Promise Me”. Foust’s voicing of Julia’s dream memories of a time prior to going into hiding in “Shine & Blur” cleaves to her prologue’s conceit. It is also gorgeous poetry:







In my dream, I do not shy



away when you lean in…


… I remember kissing you before—



in the hedgerow, on the shore, on the threshold 



of a door opening to everything—break & release



released in a river, then all blur & shine, shine & blur. 







The concrete world comes crashing back in section three, “Leaving the American Sector” with the demise of the lovers’ escape. Here Foust’s anger is raw and unmitigated, especially in a suite of poems dealing with sexual violation of women and restriction to access to abortion. Foust innumerates familiar threats to women’s agency and health, some torn from the headlines, closing with sardonic humor in the third of the three poems, a Dick and Jane primer headed with a epigraph quote from President Trump: “It’s a very scary time for young men in America”



The section closes with one more litany in “Here the Worst Did Not Happen”, a poem confronting an electorate that puts corrupt politicians into office, one that lives in relative comfort compared to the devastation of populations in Ukraine and Gaza, comfort that may well be clocking out given the permanent presence of Big Brother; a entity identified by Orwell in 1949 that will not culminate with Donald Trump, who has always been a garish symptom of something structurally wrong, something truly evil in America. 



There are stretches where the narration and imparting of information seem to edge out “poetry,” but these are few. In fact, the wonder of You Are Leaving the American Sector; Love Poems is the integrity of poetry conveying complex narrative, lists, and streams of information across three chapters of verse. My margin notes include more than one scribbled “beautiful”.


Scaffolded by Orwell’s novel, Foust’s collection remains focused on our times, on what we’ve seen, what we see, and what we will see in America with the surge toward a Trump oligarchy. The story is its own, managing to rise as personal testimony amidst the familiar crisis. One would not need to re-read 1984 to fully engage with Foust’s urgent reckoning.

Red Letter Poem #245

 The Red Letters

 





In ancient Rome, feast days were indicated on the calendar by red letters.

To my mind, all poetry and art serves as a reminder that every day we wake together beneath the sun is a red-letter day.



––Steven Ratiner





Red Letter Poem #245




Travelling Solo


The enveloping comfort of solitude

among strangers, to-do list suspended,

book unopened in my lap. The engine huffs.

Out the window, the station scrolls by.



Figures on the platform wave, turn away.

The urban apron of concrete, abutments,

electric lines and power stations gives way to

shabby backyards, low-rent neighborhoods.



Sofa cushions, a one-wheeled bike,

a blue plastic bucket and orange traffic cone

adorn the embankment. I crack the code in

the balloon letters of the bright, defiant graffiti.



A trance, as if serenity enfolds me as

I become, for once, my own destination.


––Bonnie Bishop





* * *





[Coming to a fork in the path, Alice addresses the Cheshire Cat:]



`Would you tell me, please, which way I ought to go from here?'

`That depends a good deal on where you want to get to,' said the Cat.

`I don't much care where––' said Alice.

`Then it doesn't matter which way you go,' said the Cat.

`––so long as I get somewhere,' Alice added as an explanation.

`Oh, you're sure to do that,' said the Cat, `if you only walk long enough.'



― Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland



We’re a particularly directed species, aren’t we? A sense of purpose, forward momentum, clear goals and chosen destinations––these are prized by humans as keys to life-satisfaction. I’m not disputing their importance––I think I’m as driven as the next creature, negotiating the maze or racing down the track––but I do know how beneficial it is sometimes to. . .well, delay, or wander, or even (hope my mother can’t hear me) idle. I remember discussing, with the esteemed poet William Stafford, the power involved in being lost, even momentarily. It’s an image that had frequently found a place in his poems. His response: “I believe it's kind of an emblem for that deliciousness that I was trying to get into my explanation about the 'delicious writing' of the early morning. That if you're lost enough, then the experience of now is your guide to what comes next.” Of course, we have been taught by the Buddhists about the vitality of simply being present to the moment; and from the Taoists, we’ve been counseled on the importance of allowing the way––the cosmic current that shapes creation––to guide our decisions, carry us along. But let’s be honest: when do we actually permit ourselves the luxury of simply going with the flow? One of the few occasions for many of us is when we depart from our homes, our routines, and surrender ourselves for several hours into the hands of the airline pilot or train engineer. We no longer need to steer; we can avoid the requirement of meetings and work product (though laptops and Zoom connections have encroached upon that too much of late.) We get to be ourselves, to sit quietly inside our own consciousness, and simply look out at the world.



Bonnie Bishop––poet, educator, social activist––has authored a chapbook and two full-length collections, the most recent being River Jazz (Every Other Thursday Press,) a portrait of her beloved New Orleans and its music. Her work is included in EOT’s new anthology, The Heart Off Guard. In today’s Letter, Bonnie has indeed “cracked the code,” as she stares out at the landscape rushing past, barreling down an unnamed Amtrak line to some unspecified station. In the small, even shabby, particulars of our daily experience, we know we are alive. In the used-up, broken-down, cast-off ephemera of lives passing, we grasp the commonality of what writers used to call (with fanfares and dramatic lighting) the human condition. Despite the great beauty and insight which might reside within that novel “unopened in my lap,” the speaker opts instead for the wild-style poetry of graffiti scrawled along the railway, or the flickering frames glimpsed on the passing platforms, the cinema of the ordinary. Reading her poem, I actually felt myself exhaling slowly––ah!­­––as if I were being offered a seat beside her. Then, after three visually-detailed quatrains, the speaker drifts toward the poetic: “A trance, as if serenity enfolds me as/ I become, for once, my own destination.” A lovely thought––but only then it dawned on me: this is an unrhymed sonnet! And here in the volta, or ‘turn’ that’s customary in the closing couplet, a greater meaning is being imposed upon this locomotive idyll. Of course, just like the rest of us, the speaker’s serenity is fleeting; big ideas intrude––and I wonder just when the poet drifted from being a pair of eyes observing to a purposeful mind commanding a ballpoint pen? No longer lost in the moment, she realizes she can employ this lovely now as a ticket to a poet’s much-loved station on the page. Perhaps it is unavoidable; and I’m grateful, not simply for the understated elegance of Bonnie’s verse, but for the honest way she has allowed us the experience of how ephemeral peace morphs into something else. Still, rereading it, the poem remains a space I can travel inside, delaying my arrival at that final couplet. Like Alice, I long to arrive “somewhere”; but perhaps that moment of being “my own destination”––before self-awareness sets in––is what the heart desired all along.

 

 

 

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