THE
CHIMERAS written by Gérard de Nerval, was originally published in 1854 in
French.
Though the collection contains only eight poems, it is a work of monumental genius.THECHIMERAS It is a vision of unfettered idealism, madness, hope, and despair—that blossoms into a beautiful sonnet sermon Nerval calls ‘Golden Verses’.
Though the collection contains only eight poems, it is a work of monumental genius.THECHIMERAS It is a vision of unfettered idealism, madness, hope, and despair—that blossoms into a beautiful sonnet sermon Nerval calls ‘Golden Verses’.
On page 21, Nerval
writes: “This sublime, insensate madman, it was he, one could be sure, / This
Icarus forgotten who again began to soar”. The myth of Icarus and Daedalus is a
cautionary tale. It is the story of a son who ignores his father’s wisdom and
flies to the sun—though he knew the wax would melt from his wings, and the
ocean would devour him. For Nerval characters like Icarus are heroes— martyrs
who died in the pursuit of idealism and truth. Nerval places figures like Icarus
alongside Christ and other prophets from often incongruous religions and myths.
Henry Weinfield’s brilliant English translation and Douglas Kinsey’s beautiful
illustrations add rich layers and levels of depth to this collection.
Weinfield’s and Kinsey’s THE
CHIMERAS, was my first time reading Nerval. When I first saw Weinfield’s
and Kinsey’s translation I was immediately drawn to the book’s cover art. It
has an illustration of a chimera on it. On the body of the chimera are white
lines, which reminded me of a cave painting. I randomly flipped the book open
to page 11 to a poem titled ‘Artemis’, and saw the lines:
“White roses fall! Profanation to our gods:
Fall, white phantoms, from your skies, scorched abodes:
—The saint of the abyss is more saintly to my eyes.”
The moment I read those lines I was mesmerized, and looked Nerval up on Google, to learn that he that was one of the great giants of French Romanticism. There are many books out there, and we all have only so much time to read. I only spend time reading books that expose me to perspectives and ideas that challenge my own, teach me valuable skills, and or make me a better person. Had any one of the three artists not done exceptional work I doubt I would have continued reading this book. Nerval and Weinfield have created poetry that is exceptionally beautiful and elegant. The poetry is complex and forces the reader to confront the inescapable darkness and egocentrism prevalent at the core of human nature.
“White roses fall! Profanation to our gods:
Fall, white phantoms, from your skies, scorched abodes:
—The saint of the abyss is more saintly to my eyes.”
The moment I read those lines I was mesmerized, and looked Nerval up on Google, to learn that he that was one of the great giants of French Romanticism. There are many books out there, and we all have only so much time to read. I only spend time reading books that expose me to perspectives and ideas that challenge my own, teach me valuable skills, and or make me a better person. Had any one of the three artists not done exceptional work I doubt I would have continued reading this book. Nerval and Weinfield have created poetry that is exceptionally beautiful and elegant. The poetry is complex and forces the reader to confront the inescapable darkness and egocentrism prevalent at the core of human nature.
Traditionally,
the sonnet was a form used to write love poems—and most sonnets were written in
praise of a woman and or her beauty. THE CHIMERAS is a sonnet sequence,
where the ‘truth’ is personified, and praised in verse—in Greek mythology, the
chimera is a female. In THE CHIMERAS the ‘truth’ that Nerval pines after
takes on the form of a chimera: many headed, strange bodied, etc— each sonnet in
the sequence forming one of the parts of the chimera. Since each individual
sonnet is a crossbreeding of various religions, and myths— each individual
sonnet can also be thought of as a chimera as well.
Growing
up I was raised in a bilingual family, and I never really thought too much
about what an accent meant until recently. An accent is the superpositioning of
one language and by extension one culture on another. Many immigrant families,
like my own, often find themselves negotiating and bartering two different cultures.
The task of the translator is similar to the aforementioned phenomenon—there is
a constant negotiation between different languages and the cultures. It is
particularly complex when translating work from a different time and poetic
tradition.
Translating between French and
English is particularly interesting because English is influenced heavily by
French and German. I have read before that the English of the ‘upper class’ was
derived more heavily from French, while the English of the lower classes was derived
more heavily from German. When reading a French to English translation, I would
expect to find these linguistic patterns also present in the resulting
translated work, and often do. Interestingly, Weinfield’s translation reads
more like the translation of a 1900’s-1950’s Greek Myth or Epic, than a French
poem. After reading Weinfield’s translation of THE CHIMERAS, I decided
to read several other translations of THE CHIMERAS as well.
Other translations of THE
CHIMERAS read more like a French to English translation, the expected
linguistic patterns finding their way into the poetry. Weinfield’s careful word
selection ensures that that the poetry has a unique ‘mythical’ tone to it. I
would also argue that it is the most faithful translation of THE CHIMERAS
I have read so far. Translating work this faithfully takes great skill. In the
poem “Myrtho”, Nerval’s writes “À ton front inondé des clartés d'Orient,”. Weinfield’s
translation reads, “Your forehead flooded by the Orient’s bright rays”. Weinfield
uses the uses the word “Orient” while other translators refrain from using it,
and instead write “morning light”, or “radiance of the East”. The reference to
Asia is lost when d’Orient is translated to “morning light” or “radiance of the
East”.
If the word orient wasn’t capitalized it would
simply mean “situated in or belonging to the East”— referring to the position
of the morning sun. Capitalizing the word ‘Orient’ carries a more Eurocentric
reference to Asia. Nerval wrote THE CHIMERAS, in the 1850’s in the heart
of European Imperialism. Around this time a great deal of Eastern scripture and
literature was being translated by the likes of Ralph T. H. Griffith, Max Muller, Karl Friedrich Neumann, and etc. The
word ‘Orient’ plays a critical role in THE CHIMERAS, since the book
draws from many myths and scriptures. Additionally, the Romanticist movement as
whole was heavily influenced by Eastern scripture and philosophy—so, changing
the word Orient drastically alters the meaning and decontextualizes of the poem.
In mythology Myrto is a Maenad, or a
female follower of Dionysus. Many translators change the name Iacchus to
Bacchus, possibly to make the poem more accessible to the reader. Though even
in mythology Bacchus is closely associated with Iacchus, they are not one and
the same. Iacchus is a minor god belonging to an agrarian cult, associated with
Demeter and Persephone; while Bacchus has been associated with several
different cults such as the hedonistic cult of Bacchus. Demeter and Persephone
play an important role in explaining the natural cycles of the world, life, and
death; while the cult of Bacchus was associated more so with sensual pleasures.
Translating Iacchus into the Bacchus completely strips the poem of its Eleusian
Mysteries (the agrarian cult) context. In the third verse of the poem “Myrtho”,
Weinfield’s translation reads “the volcano comes alive” while others translated
to “the volcano boiled up again”, and “I know why that volcano is aflame”. A
characteristic of many myths is the personification of natural phenomenon. In a
poem that draws very heavily on Greek Mythology, there is mountain of
difference between saying the “volcano is alive”, and “the volcano boiled up
again”. While the word alive is a personification of a natural event, the latter
are both retellings of an event. Myths serve many purposes—retelling events is
one of them, but another is explaining why they happened. If a child were to ask,
“why is there lava everywhere?”, “it boiled up again” does not adequately answer
why. On the other hand, “it came alive”, or “it was sleeping, and now it is
awake” not only answers what, but also provides a more satiating answer to why
something happened the way it did. Additionally,
using the word ‘alive’ as opposed to ‘boiled up again’ does a better job of
tying back into the narrative of Demeter and Persephone, the seasons, life and
death, etc.
Several years back when I was discussing
the work of Rabindranath Tagore with one of my Bengali friends, they explained to
me that Bengali is a very flowery language. He had me listen to Tagore in
Bengali, to get a better understanding of what the poem would have sounded like
in its original language. I don’t speak
French, so to get a better sense of what Nerval’s work sounds like, I listened
to several French readings of his poetry. When I compared Weinfield’s
translations with the translations of other English translators I found that
Weinfield’s was very close to Nerval’s original sound. Weinfield is an
accomplished poet with a great ear and captures Nerval’s melodies with precision.
Many poetry translators, especially with rhyming poetry, will try to force
rhymes just to maintain form—resulting in clunky writing. Weinfield’s
translation is very elegant—the rhymes and sounds, remarkably close to
Nerval’s.
Weinfield’s and Kinsey’s project
is unlike any other take on THE CHIMERAS: each of Nerval’s sonnets are
accompanied by one of the Kinsey’s illustrations. Each of the pieces are stylistically very
different. The illustration that goes alongside ‘Myrtho’ on page 3 looks a bit
like a Renaissance painting, while the painting on page 18 has a
post-Impressionist feel to it. However, each of the paintings are a blending of
many different styles—and any attempts at categorizing them would be
reductionist and do Kinsey’s work little justice. The artwork influences the
poems in a very interesting way. I find visual arts to be more accessible to my
eye than words and found myself first looking at the paintings, then reading
the poetry. Furthermore, since the paintings were laid out on the left side of
the book as opposed to the right side—I found myself taking a quick glimpse of
Kinsey’s art before reading each of the lines.
When we read English, most
of us, read from the left side to the right side of the page. In poetry the end
of each line functions as a soft pause, or a fractional comma or period. When
the paintings are laid out on the left side of the manuscript, the reader’s
eyes instinctually start on the left side and moves to the right again, where
it stops. Then it goes back to the left side where it catches a glimpse of
Kinsey’s painting before the next line is read. This to me was a bit like going
to a museum looking at a work of art, and then reading the label underneath it.
However, since the artwork and the sonnets were given equal page economy, the
reader looks at the artwork as they read the poems. Nerval’s sonnets on their
own are extremely complex and often the emotional power of the poems is muzzled
by the intellectual. Kinsey’s illustrations are abstract and use bold color
choices and patterns— this helps draw the emotions out of the poems, while at
the same time not forcing interpretation on the reader.
In
summation, I would like to thank Weinfield and Kinsey for the work they have
done. Had it not been for them, I would have never read Nerval’s magnificent
poetry. Thank you both for your remarkable work!
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