Andrea Cohen |
Furs
Not Mine
By
Andrea Cohen
Four
Way Books
New
York, NY
ISBN:
978-1-935536-51-2
89
Pages
Review
by Dennis Daly
Poems
as polished as those by Andrea Cohen give up their secrets very slowly. Furs
Not Mine, Cohen’s newest collection encourages her readers
to enter its confines with enameled logic and diamond-edged imagery. Once
inside one finds a sense of loss, a Siberian coldness, and a ghostly hunger for
a way out. Escape, however, may not be in the cards. The chilliness continues
even after the book’s completion and Cohen’s well-wrought lines ebb away into mnemonic
limbo.
The
opening poem, a really marvelous short piece entitled The Committee Weighs In
sets the tone. Give and take repartee between mother and daughter exudes
warmth, family closeness, and intellectual life. Then, of course, clarity
enters with its uncomfortable surprises. The poet’s persona has just jokingly
announced her reception of the Nobel Prize to her mother who engages playfully.
The poem continues,
Again?
she says. Which
discipline
this time?
It’s
a little game
we
play: I pretend
I’m
somebody, she
pretends
she isn’t dead.
Notice
that the startling last line all but swallows up the self-deprecating humor
prefacing it. Nice touch.
Breaking
and Entering, a poem of profound pessimism, leaves one locked in a world of
night where homes devolve into lonely interiors. Cohen’s wit takes control
here, saving the day and keeping the piece emotionally taut. Here’s the heart
of the poem,
Mostly
the home
invasion
is an inside
job:
your interiors
get
ravaged and pointing
a
finger, you
mean
to seek
damages.
I left
the
window open,
told
the guard
dogs
to roll over.
He
pinched my last
Candlestick…
Cohen’s
poem Macaroons quips about the penultimate things of life, as well as the
acceptance of death. Her tone is clipped. The phrase “I get it” takes on a
sullen choral power not directed at her dead mother, but rather at the deal
humanity gets as one by one they make their way through the brutish and
duplicitous aspects of life. The poet especially pummels the concept of the
Promised Land. Navigating the short lines and tight logic I felt breathless,
caught in the poem, unable to slip out between the syllables. From the very
first line the tone of the piece never varies. Cohen opens her strange lament with
acceptance, aggressive acceptance,
I
get it now
You’re
dead.
You
can’t do
everything
you
used to.
Reruns
instead
of
new episodes.
I
get it.
You
can’t send
Macaroons
this Passover…
My
favorite poem in this collection Cohen entitles Bargain. The poet relates a
story line as old as human kind. Well-heeled travelers are led into the desert,
perhaps for quixotic reasons (Magi? tourists?). Their guide wants to
renegotiate the terms of their agreement now that he has the upper hand. In the
desert no deal is iron-clad. Everything can be renegotiated when circumstances
change. The irony of their situation strikes a chord due to the self-satisfied
arrogance that led the travelers into this trap of their own making. In fact I
know a little bit about this type of negotiation, only it happened to me at
12,000 feet in the Hind Kush Mountains. My guides, who otherwise were quite
honest, saw an opportunity to exercise their business acumen. We compromised.
Back to the review at hand. Cohen ends this poem with a grounding eye-opening
flip. She uses this technique in many of her pieces and she does it well.
Actually, she does it better than anyone I can think of. The poet details a
changing reality,
Such
slim wages
to
take us, without
complaint,
all the way—
so
far, without a star.
We
were in the middle
of
nowhere, or at its edge.
Friends,
he asked, from
inside
that blackness,
what
will you pay me
to
take you back?
The
word “Friends” in this context deserves special mention for its remarkable and
almost instantaneous transformation into a sinister threat par excellence,
infused with surrounding darkness in case one misses the point.
Furs
Not Mine, the title poem, seems almost etched onto the page. Each line exposing
angular depth as it builds into the singular metaphor. The poet’s spiritual iciness
speaks for itself. Consider these telling lines,
…one
need
not be or speak Russian
to
comprehend the sense
of
furs not mine. One need only
to
have known deep cold, an inmost
Siberia
made more Siberian by one
who
basks nearby, oblivious in her Bolivia.
Like
an unindicted co-conspirator he lords over us, this God of ours, the God of Job,
with arched right eye and then judges us for what we do and don’t do. Yes, we
created this God not only to share our guilt, but also to commiserate with us
over his so-called gift of free will. Yeah, thanks a bunch. Cohen puts it
another way in her riveting poem entitled Sins of Omission. Her protagonist,
stricken with regret over life choices and lost potential, tests the very
reality of her dream-world and calmly arrives at its dead end. Her family
dissolves as she steps back in existential dread,
…God
knows
we’ve
been left
out
by God.
The
last part I
say
under my breath
so
my son
won’t
hear. But—
little
pitchers—he
does.
Mom, he
says
his brow knit.
It’s
the moment
I’ve
dreaded. You
know
I don’t
really
exist, right?
Poems
that confront the glacial landscapes deeply within our shared consciousness are
few and far between. Cohen’s icy architectures in this stellar collection
showcase her uncommon bravery in facing humanity’s common, but no less scary,
demons. Engagement generates warmth. That’s one of the poet’s secrets. Now
breathe.
Fantastic review!
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